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(Contains: nudity, sexual themes and ideologically sensitive material)
Alright, now, I haven't wrote a fanfic for forever, so sorry if there's any spelling or grammar mistakes. Also, I'm a Canadian, so I will be using Canadian English. BTW, I don't hate Seychelles, but she's the only opponent I could use. Thanks!
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Francis Bonnfoy - France
Michelle - Seychelles
Arthur Kirkland - United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland/England
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(y/n) - your name
(f/c1) - favourite colour1
(f/c2) - favourite colour2
(y/c) - your country
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(y/n) is a fine young lady, had a kind eyes, soft hair, and the type of body. That body, that's attractive to those types of men. Those men, were her friends, the Bad Touch Trio. There was one man in this, trio, was Francis Bonnfoy. He was a sexy man, with those looks and that smile. He's a flirt, but sweet and kind in one spot. He had you melt like an ice cream in the middle of summer. She was falling hard for this man. Not too hard, but not too little.

The one thing that dissapointed little (y/n), was that Francis didn't pay much attentoin to her. She wanted this man too like her, not someone else. A girl named Michelle liked a boy named Arthur, a friend, or more as to say, rival. But Francis kept flirting with her, behind poor (y/n)'s back. Michelle supported (y/n), but it was no luck.

"(y/n), I'm sure he'll notice you. I can jst tell hi-" "It's okay, Michelle, I can handle this." (y/n) in her (f/c1) tanktop, the words on it said 'Paris is Sexy', and black jean shorts, with Michelle in a yellow summer dress, (y/n) were chatting about your crushes. "What about Arthur?" (y/n) questoined the Seychellese girl. "He's cuter than ever! He.." Michelle kept on chatting on how 'sexy' and 'British' he was.  "... him and Francis also-" RING, rang (y/n)'s phone. It was Francis. "I better get going." answered Michelle, and left. "Mkay." she answered. (y/n) answered the phone "Yellow~?" (y/n) joked. " Bonjour.. May you please come over to visit, mon chere?" the Frenchman answered. (y/n) let out a faint blush, and tried to hide it, even if he was a kilometere or two away.

(y/n) hopped off the bus and walked across the street. This is so exiting! I can't wait to see Francis, I can't believe he actually invited me over she thought. About to knock the door, it flung open. " Bonjour~." the sexy voice answered, (y/n) blushed deeply, and Francis made his all-original laugh. "Ohonhonhon~ It's okay mon chere." he flirted. (y/n) bowed and walked inside. Francis smirked. "Guess who tolled me how you feel." suddenly, a chill shot down (y/n)'s back. I am going ro kill Michelle next time I see her (y/n) thought. "Come with me." he grabbed your hand and draged (y/n) upstairs, as she blush a deeper red.

He pushed you in his room, pinning you to the bed. "Your mine, mon fleur, and you know you want that~." he cooed softly into her ear. Planting soft kisses down his neck, he played aroung with (y/n)'s bra strap. She messed with the buttns on his blouse, revealing a well-toned chest. "You like that?" she smirked. Francis almost laughed so hard he coughed. "Of course~ what about, THIS?" he slid off (y/n)'s shirt, reveaveling a (f/c1) bra with (f/c2) lace. He instantly ripped it off and kneaded her breasts softly, releasing moans of pleasure. She touched the bulge in her new lover's pants, making him moan suggestivly. (y/n) giggled a bit, Francis soon joining the soft melody of giggles. She played with the rim of his pants, soon pulling them out.

She slid off the boxers aong with the pants, releaving a wet, crotch.  She pulled it into her mouth, bobbing into a soft rythm while sucking with lust. Francis was playing around with (y/n)'s @$$, causing soft moans to reveal. Once Francis tugged her bottem off, followed by her panties, he gave (y/n) a kiss on the nose a was ready. He positoined himself. (y/n) screamed of pain, but pleasure soon replaced it. Soon after that, she plopped beside him.

Both lovers soon fell asleep into slumber. Michelle, coming inside, smiled to herself. Just as planned! she thought.
Edit; April 21, 2013—
READ READ READ READ READ
:iconreadplz:
This.
Was.
Written.
So.
Fucking.
Long.
AGO.

I don't even want to keep it anymore. The only people who read it are stupid hetaboos. Sorry, but my fanfic right here is very outdated.
I'm already applying to a normal liturture and graphic noveling college so to me this is pure fail. I wore this when I myself was a hetaboo.
Now pardon me, this fanfic is probably te worst and least correct I've ever written. So are my other ones. I don't write fanfictions anymore, and I'm not that into Hetalia.



For all you Francey-pantsies fans~! Enjoy

Francis now owns your virginity, and wants you to:
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KiddoKunsGirl Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
I just round out that Sychelle's name is Michelle. My real name is Michelle..... Ehhhhhhh SAVE ME GERMANY THE FRENCHMAN IS CHASING ME AND DOING HIS OHNHONHON !! Lol I am also French. MY WHOLE NAME IS FRENCH AHHHHH
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dainadragonite Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Student Artist
omg b.a.p
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cathylikeseverything Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
omg I’m sorry you had to read this really really old and awful vic but yes, i’m a b.a.p fan huhuhu
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dainadragonite Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Student Artist
it is ok :) who is you bias mine is Zelo he is my ultamet bias
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cathylikeseverything Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
my bias changes with every era, currently its yongguk
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dainadragonite Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Artist
his abbs :) are omg so sexy
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cathylikeseverything Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i like this voice!! a lot of the time it doesn’t matter how attractive they are/if they have abs, its kind of just a bonus. 
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dainadragonite Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student Artist
true that
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icespark1298 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
I have a friend called Michelle and I think she would have done exactly the same XD
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GinaTheFaceOfAwesome Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't notice any changes from American compared to the Canadian...
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cathylikeseverything Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist

This.
Was.
Written.
So.
Fucking.
Long.
AGO.

I don't even want to keep it anymore. The only people who read it are stupid hetaboos. Sorry, but my fanfic right here is very outdated.
I'm already applying to a normal liturture and graphic noveling college so to me this is pure fail. I wore this when I myself was a hetaboo.
Now pardon me, this fanfic is probably te worst and least correct I've ever written. So are my other ones. I don't write fanfictions anymore, and I'm not that into Hetalia. 


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KittyKat1320 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sneone pass me a tissue....
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MewLilla Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Student
:icontissueplz: Here!
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Pruhunshipper4life Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconcomputernosebleedplz: :iconsexyfranceplz: :iconimdeadplz:
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Koi-Fish9 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconbignosebleedplz:
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LevanPolka Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist
pervplz
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Cuberry1 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconpervplz: here ya go
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Symphano Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
All these nosebleed icons are hilarious!
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AwfulRamona Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
So many god damn nosebleeds ^-^
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sebbysmaster13 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Love you france
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Prussiasbitch911 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconspainapprovedplz:
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Eloise-Bentley Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
I want his babies <3
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YouOnlyZingOnce Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
OH MY CUSSING YES. THIS WAS AAAAHH BEAUTIFUL. I'M GONNA LOOK AT PICTURES OF DAVID SPADE NOW.
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georgygirl443 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Artist
XD Francis leaves no girl a virgin jkjk

*nosebleed* Lol this is awesome
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NuttyIceCream Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of all people, France takes my virginity
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blood-and-angel-cake Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i dont think u would understand how hard I snorted in public
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AtlantisReturns Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Pardon moi, but I can't help myself, I have to correct your French. In "mon fleur" the "mon" would actually be "ma" because it is in reference to a female and not followed by a vowel. Also you're missing an i in the word "cherie" this word also has an accent ague over the first e but I don't know how to type that in without reprogramming my computer. other than that, good job!
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cathylikeseverything Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Please read description! You'll get my point.
This fanfiction is awfully old and I'm far by not even into Hetalia anymore.
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KillJoy1222 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconnosebleedplz: Ohmygosh. :heart:
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NeonFir3Fly Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
:iconnosebleedplz:
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saylila Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconpervplz:
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saylila Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I SIMPLY LUV IT GOD C'OME ON !!!!
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I-love-Doitsu Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
0o I love it MAJOR NOSE BLEED
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Jumpshinx Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
The whole time i was reading it my face was like "oAo.........." then i was like "well that went well...."
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VocaloidCH--Meiko Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
>///w///>
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marmarhill192 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it was Michelle! she was behind it all along! DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
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XxXMISTERchairXxX Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Man I was saving my virginity for Prussia ;__:
AAANNNYYYWWWAAAYYYSSSS I LIKED TIS FANFIC OWO
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Amaterasucake Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Such I nice fic . keep up the good work
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ClaireM2 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
How did that get posted three times? O.o
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ClaireM2 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
So...I'm a man...?
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FrenchFreakgirl Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconpervplz:
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EmO-KiTtEn24 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
I'm glad he owns it!







I support FRUK!
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Cheeseburgerfantic Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
Agreed
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bunpika121 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Some of the french is wrong...you gotta remember masculine and feminine differences! XD "mon chere" would be "ma cherie".
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cathylikeseverything Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is very, very old, I'm beggining to learn French so I've recognised that. Most likely I'll be deleting this, because this story is terribale and I can definatly do much better than this.
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bunpika121 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thats ok, sorry! I'm just a little picky I suppose…it comes from learning French at school ^^;
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puccafan2 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I liked this, but it escalated too quickly.
"She told me how you feel about me"
"Crap!"
*does it*

Hmm?
I really liked it, 3 out of 5 stars. Just don't escalate the story that fast ^^
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cathylikeseverything Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is very, very old. I plan on remaking all my stories, so please, don’t mind this. It’s all from my weeaboo ages ; u ;
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puccafan2 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
X3 It's good! I liked it a lot :D
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heta1iaphan Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student Photographer
oh my god that was freakin amazing!
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